[托福写作]【托福写作】托福写作中的“镇魂句”




在托福写作中是一种有用的“出字”工具,尤其是对那些面对闪烁的光标一筹莫展无从写起的同学,或是日夜挣扎在独立300字数线的盆友。如能勤快一点,记十个八个(独立作文题目涉及的)常用概念的定义,考试的时候凡能用到某个这样的定义句,噼里啪啦先打出来,看着这一两行甚至三四行文字,心里自然能踏实许多。因此,这样的句子就被称为“镇魂句”了。
常在托福独立写作的课程体系中讲到“下定义”这个工具,无论是开头(“天下大势”型)还是主体段落(“explanation”部分中的“下定义”工具)都能祭出这招,而且用的得当的话,效果非常不错,也可以有效填充文章内容。
整理这些定义的时候,原则是“用户友好型”,也就是常用、好懂、好记、难易适中。这些定义句的内容参考了字典、百科、网上资料等处的释义,但是删掉了过于技术化和学术化的描述,必要时调整和改写之。

“镇魂句”怎么用?
下面小托为大家整理了“镇魂句”——也就是定义句的list,其中,橙色粗体部分的就是这些常用概念名词(如telephone ),而整个句子就是对这一概念的定义。每个定义句的后面,有该句可能
用到的独立作文题目举例,都出自近期托福机经,极富实用性。

“科技”定义:
Technology is the activity or study of using scientific knowledge for practical purposes in industry, farming, medicine, business, etc.
可能用到的题目:
Technology designed to make our life simpler actually makes our life more complicated.

“电话”定义:
The telephone is a technology of communication that makes it possible for people to talk directly to someone else in a different place.
可能用到的题目:
Telephone has had greater effects on people's lives than television.

“电视”定义:
Television, a communicative medium sending and receiving pictures and sounds by electrical signals, has become a traditional form of mass media and part of the modern culture.
可能用到的题目:
The purpose of television should be all educative, not entertaining.

“电影”定义:
Movies, moving pictures that can tell stories or show reality, have become a mainstream form of art and an important way of entertainment.
可能用到的题目:
Movies and TV have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

“电子书”定义:
An electronic book refers to a book-length publication in digital form.
可能用到的题目:
In twenty years from now, students will not use printed books anymore.

“旅行”定义:
Travel means one’s moving from a familiar place to another or to several places.
可能用到的题目:
Which way is the best for students to make new friends: joining a sport team, participating in community activities, or travelling?

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