[托福写作]托福独立写作素材分享——今天的是美好身体大分享

　　相信宅男腐女们对维多利亚秘密的天使不会不熟悉吧～今天要跟大家分享一位老师喜欢的天使!

　　为人师表，肯定不能跟你们分享维密天使的大尺度照片，所以大家先欣赏一下天使的面孔吧～Candice Swanepoel , 88年生于南非，职业模特

　　 好吧，也跟你们分享一下走秀和健身的惊艳照片吧～相信不管男生还是女生(直的或者弯的)都会流口水吧～

　　口水流完了，言归正传，记得今年暑假的机经题目吗?

　　Celebrities’ opinions are more important to young people than to old people.

　　对的，你们崇拜也好欣赏也好的偶像们是很喜欢给年轻人建议的，比如上面这位性感美人，就在Vogue杂志上给大家建议了～

　　The Secret Smoothie Recipe That Keeps Candice Swanepoel Crop Top-Ready

　　There’s a reason that designers like Michael Kors and Karl Lagerfeld have handpicked supermodel (and longtime Victoria’s Secret angel) Candice Swanepoel to wear their most body-conscious runway creations—not to mention that Karlie Kloss has admitted to having a “girl crush” on the South African stunner. All 69 inches of her golden, leggy frame have been sculpted to near perfection through intensive kickboxing and ModelFit sessions. But Swanepoel specifically credits her flat-as-a-board stomach to regular yoga classes and one anti-inflammatory,energy boosting smoothie. Which is to say that when she knows she’ll be slipping into a crop top for a day on the beach or a night on the red carpet, she can be found moving through a vinyasa, then sipping on a supercharged mix of ingredients. Here, she shares her foolproof smoothie mix.

　　1 frozen banana

　　1 tsp. protein powder

　　1 cup blueberries

　　1 T chia seeds

　　2 T almond butter

　　1.5 cups coconut water

　　1 tsp. spirulina

　　关键词：

　　crop top 露腹短上衣 handpick 钦点

　　foolproof 万无一失的，肯定成功的

　　anti-inflammatory 抗炎的，消炎的(也是听力词汇)

　　尽管Candice 给我们的是smoothie recipe，但我们可别当真啊～因为真正的天使是像魔鬼般的训练才有这样的身材的(intensive kickboxing and ModelFit sessions)

　　那如何把上面一段写到我们的托福作文中呢～

　　当然还是按照我们上课讲的主题句，解释，例证(对比论证)，细节和总结句这样的结构了。

　　Young people who are exposed to a lot of celebrity news from media can be easily influenced in allkinds of facets. Owning to the reason of wanting to be as shining as stars they admire, adolescents often like to take advice from the top models, popular actors, or fashion icons. For instance, Candice Swanepoel, a professional model of Victoria’s Secret, has drawn a lot of attention since 2010, when she joined the most famous lingerie brand in the world. Her flawless body shape fascinates many young girls and bo

ys, so when she gave a piece of advice on Vogue magazine thata secret smoothie recipe and intensive kickboxing contribute to her sculpted legs and stomach, many young minds, especially girls were following her suggestions. By contrast, for older and much mature groups, they often neglect the entertainment industry, and care less about the outward appearance but the virtues valued by tradition. Those reputed personalities, therefore, has more impact on youngsters.

　　当然一个例子用一个题目太可惜了～

　　关于健康的题目我们也可以用啊，比如

　　It is easier to maintain health today than it was in the past。——选今天把，因为天使可以给建议啊～

　　当然，要想跟托福君拜拜，还是多听老师的建议吧～多练多写，多修改多反思啦～～